Reviews for autumn imprints
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
i like the rhythm in this poem. and the first line "leaves leave." hehe. i would love opinions on my work from a writer like you - it would mean a lot!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I really like this piece. I think the imagery is great. I also liked the repetition of imprint it worked really well to create a flow. The way you connected the whole imprints into autumn and the seasons into the person's life at the end was also really well done. Great piece.

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lymli chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
repeat & retreat

the autumn pavements leave you

haunted with imprints

I like that part.