|Reviews for The Cirrus Cloud Dreamer|
| June chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Honestly, I don't understand most of your work.
I think a few poems just don't have a point.
This however, was good. The first few lines were perfect.
I also prefer your non rhyming poems to the rhyming ones.
The sky/moon/cloud/stars is usually mentioned in every piece, directly or indirectly. You could try openning your mind to the other areas of descriptions.
You should also try writing song lyrics or a short story! You've mentioned that you like rock, so work on that and go on from there!
Anyway, good luck ]
| RuhFuh chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I loved the first four lines. Absolutely brilliant.
| Delicate chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
"squiggly roads and swirling
On the maps, in the atlas-"
love the way that you described
the atlas. maps themselves are so
beautifully made, and your words
definitely did them justice.
| Pink Parfait chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Beautiful, even though I didn't quite understand it!