|Reviews for In Vienna|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Review Marathon this weekend! (link in my profile)
I like this. I like how the title is really the first line of the piece. That was nice. I also like the way you described the souvenir shop. That was really great.
The middle stanza was really sweet. I liked how you described the kissing the second line. That was very subtle and nicely done.
The ending was interesting too. I wasn't sure if it was true or not. Like is that really while he won't do it or is it just an excuse?