Reviews for Door
HeroofEnelios chapter 4 . 11/12/2010
Very interesting chapter. So Kyle and Jade's brother can't recognize them? I have a feeling I might know why, but for now it will go unsaid. Nice job here!
HeroofEnelios chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
Great interactions with the characters in the chapter and as the names were introduced, I was starting to realize a pattern in the way they were named. Hm...I wonder if that is going to play a role later on. Great chapter again!
HeroofEnelios chapter 2 . 11/12/2010
It must be pretty tantalizing for Kyle to follow after Eoreik, since the boy doesn't know too much about what is going on and such. Jade is arrogent, but at the same time I think she's concerned for her siblings. Great chapter!
HeroofEnelios chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
A very interesting and in-depth prologue! I really like how you described the relationship between the humans and the Y'hier, it really gives a bit of insight into the story. Great beginning!
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