Reviews for No Sunshine Tomorrow
SomethingCreative-V1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Soooo sad. I hate when parents do that, beat their own kids. Anyway, thank you for the advice on my story. I edited so if you can, read over it again? Thank you though, it helps me become a better writer.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Great work. I do feel like throughout the middle piece of the work there may have been a slight too much repetition of the one line, but nothing that ruins the overall effect of the work. I really like how you captured the sense of blame, guilt and dread, rather than just the violence of a situation like this.
Dorkfishe97 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
This Fish did not know about your dark side 0_o I like :D
CrystalGW34 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Sad, but very well written. Nicely done. :)
lymli chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
the imagery about the sun in the last part is cool.

great piece.