|Reviews for Professor Irae Enter Epsilon|
| Lord Slayer chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Wow, this was a pretty long chapter.
You got a little better at it towards the end, but this one seemed a little too dialogue heavy with not enough action moving things. No, no, there was plenty of action, I just mean that some things, like when they were chasing the bird, the plot was moved along by the characters talking rather than by telling us what they're doing.
Also, never ever ever upoad "way ealier that it should," just so people can read it sooner. Take your time.