|Reviews for A Spark amongst Silver|
| poison's such a girl thing chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
This was good; the concept is fantastic, but it seems sort of hurried. I felt like there was a lot more that you could have written.
On the other hand, I like the heavy symbolism of the red scooter in the silver world- I got it from the beginning but the full implications of all of it didn't really hit me until the last line- and even though it's kind of obvious and self-explanatory, I think that's okay here. It's kind of a mildly depressing fable, with the noncomformity being her downfall.