Go threesome go!

I'm totally fine with threesomes and incest. Brocest, specifically. Yum.

Hello,
Let me start by congratulating you. This is an amazing story and I can't wait to find out we're your going with this. So I will be reading both versions, if your still doing that? Ezra is my favorite character, you've been pulling my heart strings. His sad backstory didn't seem fake.
Your story, even with the date mix up, is fluid and kept me interested with no thoughts of leaving it, ever. Your doing a great job with redeeming Paris. Most characters that play the "jerks that turn good" act never fully prove themselves. I feel like this story of yours will go far. Just keep the main idea and focus and don't rush yourself, we all have lives, some less than others.
This still doesn't change my stoic opinion on Mars, the Ass... I still see the need to have him in. He creates a little more chaos to through your readers in to keep them guessing. As always I offer any help you wish of me, ask me anything darling.

Awaiting steadily for the next chapter,

Hunter

Did you ever continue this story on another site? Like livejournal?

Jeez, why is ezra "barely over 5 ft" JESUS THATS ABOUT THE SIZE OF A 6TH GRADER AND IM VERY BOTHERED BY THAT. Hopefully ill overlook that because this story has positive feedbacks:)

Sorry, it's been forever since I went through my 'need to read' folder in my email. Heh. Anyway, I do like this chapter. Paris and Mars confuse me, though I think they're supposed to. *shakes head.*

I dropped this when I read that 'no incest' thing. Man, I am a sick sick person :D

*disappointed*

This was a sweet chapter

Nice to see you back

Please, continue this amazing story 3 :)

I just stumbled onto your story today. Its very good. I hope you keep writing.

Awesome!

I don't know how you did it but you've made me love every single one of your stories, you terrible human being! I love brotherly relationships, they're so sweet! Is it wrong I like Mars? D'aw well, Ezra is such a cutie! And I love Protective Paris! Naws! I'm going back to re-read! *Squeal!*

Saw this on someone's favourites list and read it on a whim! So glad I did. Threesome, no threesome, I'm too in love with these characters to stop reading no matter what happens. Can't wait to read more :)

Paris need Prozac and Mars needs bootcamp.

Paris has me very confused, and Darhi I want to slap. He would have to be blind not see how Ezra feels about him. Either that or Paris is highly and unusually perceptive.