|Reviews for There're So Many Ways to Lie|
| BlameMyMuses chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
First off, I'll get rid of the 'bad' things (And considering it's only spelling, it's really not that bad)
First verse: Easy TO loose
Third verse: Over THE search for it
Fourth verse: In make BELIEVE trust
Other than that, I love the idea that you're conveying. You've expressed a lot of my feelings on life in the process.
| XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
i would like to disappear off the face of the earth...but nah.
it makes me feel better that you're still writing beautiful poems. i feel better when i read them. i've been emo lately.
this poem is a great confidence booster.
and you really know what many people stress about, especially in the first verse.
by the way, "loose" in the first line should be "lose"
in the first line of the third verse, "takes" should be "take".
| Subbie chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Huh. I like the third verse the best :) it stikes me somehow.
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
This is a poetic, thoughtful observation of the contrast between reality and illusion. Sometimes the truth can be so unattractive that a beautiful lie is more appealing. So we just have to accept "...what is meant to come will come."