Reviews for Brittle Bottle
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
What I liked about this is that every two lines draws a part of the overall image. You first see the shards of glass and the blood, then the bleeding, ugly boy on the ground, and the closing complete scene.

It's an interesting approach to poetry.

A soul made of glass. It makes me think of people that are hurt easily with beautiful-looking words that carry knives.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
This impresses me as a fascinating kaleidoscopic view of life. The images are sharp but constantly shifting to form vivid new patterns. I'm sure we all have experienced "...a wild memory-without any beginning or the end."