Reviews for Thoughts and Roses
naki 4 life chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
it was awfully cheesy but the fluffier the better :D !
inkmind chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I must start off by saying that this is not stupid, as you described it at the end, in any way. It is a good piece for your first of the genera. I would like to point out the repetition in the sentences: "I love to rub my thumb across her soft cheek when we kiss. How I love to run my fingers through her soft hair." It was the only thing that I noticed that could be improved by using a different word. Overall, great job especially since you do not write this style usually.
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Aww. This is really sweet! Is it going to be a chaptered story?
chewychester chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I liked it. I would have liked it to be longer, more rambling about what he would say if the card was bigger. I want the other story too! :D