Reviews for Desperate to Barren Eyes
Rainel Krey chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I really like the simplicity of your writing. And the words you use goes well with each other. I especially like the last 3 stanzas of your poem.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
This is sure to be especially meaningful to people who think seriously about life and realize how swiftly we all are approaching the end. Most of your rhymes seem well made, except for "away" and "ways." I think you could have done better with a little more work.
Subbie chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Hm./ I like it. :)