Reviews for Shades of Gray |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cameron is such a punk. I hope everything gets a little better for the couple. Those lights sound crazy I think they definitely work for the story and are very creative. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story! I am just getting into MMA thanks to my cousins haha. Your characters are great and I like how you tied in Greek mythology into this awesome plot. I am definitely looking forward to your update! |
![]() ![]() I love your story and I am wondering how everything will turn out... but you did upload chapter 19 twice. |
![]() ![]() Now that was just low of Cameron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter :) it was really cute. I just wish one of them would make a move already! |
![]() ![]() LOVE the story ;) I think it is well put together and you have obviously done some homework. The tension betweent the two main characters is great. Reading one of your first original fiction works, I was not dissapointed! Let me know if you need anything. For all others - Definitely recommend you read this story! |
![]() ![]() It's so sweet how much Aiden care's for Kasey. |
![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() It's so sweet how Aiden cares so much for Kasey. And i wonder who the person is who attacked her. |
![]() ![]() Interesting thought of pain...but can be very true in some circumstances. |
![]() ![]() I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() I like that question. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very touching moment between these two, glad to see that Kasey sees behind Aiden's mask. Also glad to see that Aiden is opening up to Kasey, it will be interesting to see how far he continues to let her in before he shuts down. Again, I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good chapter, and while it was shorter than I hoped, there were definitely some good tidbits. I loved that Kasey stood up to Cameron. Although we don't really know the character of Cameron, I think it is safe to say that I am Team Aiden. The fact that Aiden didn't try to beat Cameron down made this even better, Kasey has to be the one who knows what she wants. The fact that Kasey would suffer just because it is her sister's day is just one little thing that shows us Kasey's true character. I loved that end part with just the parents speaking to each other, her mom seems fantastic. Good chapter, and I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't read that many stories on this site, but I am definitely glad I came across this one. I love the MMA and Greek Mythology aspects of this story. Aiden and Kasey are both great, and I can't wait to see what happens to the pair of them. I hope Kasey gets a chance to be kickass, but if not I hope that Aiden will be there for her. I can't wait to see what happens next! |