Reviews for symbolic symmetry
classic violet chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I love the title. I liked how it was like, comparing the thoughts inside someone's head, like thoughts and emotions with nature, with the ocean. how someone's mind can be like the ocean, deep and dark and how things are individual to each person, how someone can repeat something over in their mind like a 'rhythm'. at least this is what I got from your poem. it's 2:30am I'm don't think I'm entirely awake. :p really lovely poem.
Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Amazing imagery! I love the way you are playing with the different Cymbal/symbol. It makes the poem more intricate in it's meaning. I love the third stanza, I can just see a wave of cymbals crashing on each other like waves and making such a racket. Great poem and an enjoyable read.