Reviews for Where You Are |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Come on, Zacky! Let's get you your coffee." "Don't call me that," he grumbled. I'd forgotten! I smacked my forehead then turned around, armed with a million and one apologies. He arched an eyebrow, "Chill out, just don't do it again." That's my favorite part. That last line made me crack up.. BAHAHAHA, I LOVED it! XD Write more, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy to read this! I also noticed that you've written another story, which I had NO idea existed (YOU HAVE TO TELL ME ABOUT THESE THINGS) and I will be reviewing right after. I hope it's about something cool. But if it isn't, I'll review it anyway. Okay. *rubs hands together eagerly* Here we go! OKAY, YOU CAN TALK TO ME NOW! :D - WAHO! It felt like just yesterday I was a freshman in High School... - Hah! Same here! And who, you ask, is in the middle of them all?Zack Wolf, who else? - HAHAHAH! I would do that! Hot Boy Air Heads OUCH (always) - DAMN! You are getting me laughing like crazy over here. ...at the Starbucks... - Oh, you know me too well. :D I sighed, that's Zack for ya. It was the truth; Zack was the definition of a Lady Killer and he knew it; we all knew it. - I LOVE YOU. ...pumpkin flavor coffee... - YES. YESYESYESYESYES. :D I smacked my forehead then turned around, armed with a million and one apologies. - Aww. "I'm so sorry," I pulled out the wallet in my purse, "Coffee's on me." - It would have been on you anyway. I NEVER have money on me. "Wanna sleep with me?" Zack asked randomly. - HAHAHA! I gasped causing the Sunny-D to go down the wrong tube. Instantly I began choking. - YOU WOULD. He leaped off the counter, eyes wide, and began rubbing my back. - I like how you did that. I would totally freak if you choked! Sometimes I wondered if he purposely miss phrased things just to see what reaction he could get out of me. - You've unraveled my secret. What if the hottest guy at your school asked you to sleep with him? - That would be pretty damn nice. My face is on fire and my eyes are squeezed shut. - Uh-oh, was I performing "twelve minutes"? "Well, if you said I could come in, why the hell are you naked?" - This story is going to be the death of me! I'm laughing so hard over here. "Clothes man," he started. "They're just so restricting. I mean, why wear 'em in my own home? Gotta get comfy." - I speak the truth. Yes, I thought, because you showing off your man glory was such a big favor for me. - PSH, you liked it. He sighed in annoyance, "Fine." - Damn! 3 - He's taken. - No he's not. Even in his sleep he was cute. Actually, I think he was cuter, like my 2-year-old brother. He looked so much younger; so much more innocent. He'd taken his glasses off earlier and placed them on the nightstand. He sure looked different and that was the main reason why. - Wow, good for you! You've just described something that even I'VE never seen before. I respected him for it; he was my hero for it. - Awwh. :] He wouldn't ever let me touch it if he were conscious. - Oh, yes I would let you! Just don't mess it up; I'll kick your ass. His hair is his crown. - Hell, you're right! If I was ever gonna get any sleep, staring at Zack the whole night wasn't gonna help. - I love you to death for this by the way! Be proud: your story is the ONLY one on this whole site that is in my favorites category. YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND RIGHT NOW. -Zack |