Reviews for Where You Are
gumdropj chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
"Come on, Zacky! Let's get you your coffee."

"Don't call me that," he grumbled. I'd forgotten! I smacked my forehead then turned around, armed with a million and one apologies. He arched an eyebrow, "Chill out, just don't do it again."

That's my favorite part. That last line made me crack up..

BAHAHAHA, I LOVED it! XD Write more, please!
SubwayWolf chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I'm so happy to read this! I also noticed that you've written another story, which I had NO idea existed (YOU HAVE TO TELL ME ABOUT THESE THINGS) and I will be reviewing right after. I hope it's about something cool. But if it isn't, I'll review it anyway.

Okay. *rubs hands together eagerly* Here we go!

OKAY, YOU CAN TALK TO ME NOW! :D

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WAHO!

It felt like just yesterday I was a freshman in High School...

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Hah! Same here!

And who, you ask, is in the middle of them all?Zack Wolf, who else?

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HAHAHAH! I would do that!

Hot Boy Air Heads OUCH (always)

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DAMN! You are getting me laughing like crazy over here.

...at the Starbucks...

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Oh, you know me too well. :D

I sighed, that's Zack for ya. It was the truth; Zack was the definition of a Lady Killer and he knew it; we all knew it.

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I LOVE YOU.

...pumpkin flavor coffee...

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YES. YESYESYESYESYES. :D

I smacked my forehead then turned around, armed with a million and one apologies.

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Aww.

"I'm so sorry," I pulled out the wallet in my purse, "Coffee's on me."

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It would have been on you anyway. I NEVER have money on me.

"Wanna sleep with me?" Zack asked randomly.

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HAHAHA!

I gasped causing the Sunny-D to go down the wrong tube. Instantly I began choking.

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YOU WOULD.

He leaped off the counter, eyes wide, and began rubbing my back.

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I like how you did that. I would totally freak if you choked!

Sometimes I wondered if he purposely miss phrased things just to see what reaction he could get out of me.

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You've unraveled my secret.

What if the hottest guy at your school asked you to sleep with him?

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That would be pretty damn nice.

My face is on fire and my eyes are squeezed shut.

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Uh-oh, was I performing "twelve minutes"?

"Well, if you said I could come in, why the hell are you naked?"

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This story is going to be the death of me! I'm laughing so hard over here.

"Clothes man," he started. "They're just so restricting. I mean, why wear 'em in my own home? Gotta get comfy."

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I speak the truth.

Yes, I thought, because you showing off your man glory was such a big favor for me.

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PSH, you liked it.

He sighed in annoyance, "Fine."

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Damn!

3 - He's taken.

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No he's not.

Even in his sleep he was cute. Actually, I think he was cuter, like my 2-year-old brother. He looked so much younger; so much more innocent. He'd taken his glasses off earlier and placed them on the nightstand. He sure looked different and that was the main reason why.

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Wow, good for you! You've just described something that even I'VE never seen before.

I respected him for it; he was my hero for it.

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Awwh. :]

He wouldn't ever let me touch it if he were conscious.

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Oh, yes I would let you! Just don't mess it up; I'll kick your ass.

His hair is his crown.

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Hell, you're right!

If I was ever gonna get any sleep, staring at Zack the whole night wasn't gonna help.

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I love you to death for this by the way! Be proud: your story is the ONLY one on this whole site that is in my favorites category.

YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND RIGHT NOW.

-Zack