Um, I'm homeschooled, and I just started a traditional school this year.

I'm not a social weirdo.

Surprise!

Actually, Ariel means 'Lion of God' in Hebrew and was used as another name for the City of Jerusalem in the Old Testament. Shakespeare used it for the name of a spirit in his play, 'The Tempest' (1611) and one of Uranus' moons bears it, too.

...Oh,sorry. Was I going all nerd on you? Um, anyway, I like this because I'm homeschooled, too. I'd feel the same as Ariel if no one even paid attention in class. So your story has an authentic ring in that aspect.

Okay, ill admit. I giggled like a little girl at the end of this chapter!

Love the story. And im no where near finished!

I know this is the last chapter,but I wanted to thank you for writing this awesome story! :D Keep up the good work! Hope you'll have time to start another one soon! BTW, I love Ryan, he's hilarious! Happy New Year!

Hey, so I forgot my fictionpress email/password and can't review using my account. But I'd like to comment anyway because your story keeps me entertained during the preaching I was in last night at the church. I love it. I simply love it. I was smiling, annoyed, excited, etc etc when reading it. I love how you keep the story teen-lit ish while still keeping it realistic. Overall, it's a real great story. I'm glad I found it. You're an amazing writer. Keep it up :D Can't wait to see more stories from you. P.S. Ariel is the Disney Princess I love most :)

love the story.

Thts rlly a gr8 story. The technique was gr8. But Idk I think it lacked certain passion. If u could pour more of ur heart into it, it would be fine. But It does lack certain force. I'm sorry.

Thx 4 ur story.

Happy New Year! 3

GooD LucK.

Sweet ending... but will her mom approve?

Hi :) Your story is AMAZING and you have a wonderful imaginatiion to be able to create the sort of characters

that you have, aswell as all the heart-stopping moments between Ariel (love that name btw!) and Blake (not even gunna say what i think about him!)

(you kept me up till 12:20am; i had to finish it!)

I also want to thank you for your generosity and selflessness when it comes to writing this story. After i read your comment at the end of chapter 18

i was so grateful that you didnt stop writing and admired the fact that you realised you were writing this story for yourself and because its

your passion...so THANK YOU :D

This is one of the best stories i have read on FictionPress (i promise you im not lying :)) and i am definately going to tell my friends to read it ASAP!

Thank you once again for sharing your amazing talent with us, and please, please continue doing what you do best...USING YOUR AMAZING IMAGINATION AND WRITING FANTASTIC

STORIES :)

p.s is there a possibility that you could create a similar story to this but with a different storline or twist?

Yours sincerly, Amazing D

You too have an amazing new year and also a great ending though i might have to read back because it has been a while since I've red this story anyhow This was a great story and Im so glad ur friend bugged you to continue though it would be awesome if you did an epilogue though its up to you anyway byee hope to read more of your stories soon!

sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete xxx

I'm so sad it's over! But I loved it!

Okay, when I got an email saying that a new chapter of a story had been uploaded, this was seriously the last story that I was expecting to have been updated. What can I say? It's become a habit :'-)

As soon as I saw that it was this story, I have to admit I did a little internal dance. Although after I'd finished my little dance I suddenly became very nervous. Nervous, that is, for your health Amaka. I mean, are you feeling alright? You must be feeling under the weather or something if you actually updated! Mwuahaha, I'm enjoying this much needed sarcasm, the two weeks of no school have made me loose my touch, with no Connie to constantly be sarcastic to.

Anyhow, I'm extremely ecstatic that you managed to update before the New Year, considering the last time you updated was probably around this time 2010, right? ;-)

Okay, I'm done now with the moaning! I think this chapter was exceptional and I also think that the cheesiness was very due, to be honest, because out of all the 'Ariel-and-Blake-can't-be-together-oh-no-she-broke-her-leg-ouch-oh-she-is-leaving-waa'-ness it's really about time for them to just BE HAPPY AND GET TOGETHER ALREADY!

So yeah, I apologize for what may have seemed like a lunatic constantly using all three Science's as a session to say how "disappointed" I was in you for not updating (here's a little secret in case, you know, you didn't realize... I wasn't actually disappointed! *GASP FROM IMAGINARY AUDIENCE* It was just my way of getting you to update! - I know, I'm clearly too tactical and clever (and obviously blatantly modest - more sarcasm, I NEED TO USE UP ALL THIS SARCASM THAT HASN'T BEEN USED!))

Your author's note at the end made me laugh, especially how it's so Amaka-like to mention God aw :'-)

Anyway, sorry for this probably scary and slightly worrying review but I swear, I have good intentions! I'm very happy that you finally updated and now you can change the story status to - wait for it - COMPLETE!

Okay, seriously I'm done now.

I hope you had a spectacularly magical Christmas and that you have an equally amazing New Year.

I'll see you in Science!

AW! SOOOOOOOO sad its all done :'(... But I love how they kiss, so cute :)

I love birthday make-out sessions. ;P With a rose too!, awh, so sweet. IT must feel to to say The End! at the end of the old year. Happy New Year!

Aw, it's over... sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Okay I'll shut up now... But I swear to god this is one good story! And for a minute I thought she was going to commit suicide... Anyway... Yeah I'll really shut up now.

P.S.

Can't wait for more of your stories!