Reviews for A Not So Royal Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() (new reader here)omg I was like NO!theres no more chapters after this one?please update!umm I must say that I really dislike ariels mother,she's controlling,bossy and a snob.I mean I get that Ariel is all she has but she focuses on her WAY to much!and homeschooling isn't bad(I should know I'm homeschooled)it's actually fun,but I can see how Ariel wouldn't want to leave since she has her friends and Blake!speaking of Blake he confuses me,like how one minute he's flirty and cocky and the next he's caring and he like a light switch,or are all of those things just who he is?anyway I really like this story please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was pure awesomeness. blake is so amazing and charming and such a cutie! ;) when he said "i think I'm falling in love with you" I did a fan-girl squeal then scream! Gah! I love him, and this story! Update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story! Please update whenever possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() blake and ariel. really cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovin this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you get the chance to write more soon, cuase this was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've done it again! I honestly cannot stop reading! I like this side of Blake... but Ariel's Mum? Thank god my mum isn't like that! Love it btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() irritating me a bit... but I liked the chapter! |
![]() ![]() Another amazing chapter! Keep it coming! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok im fixing my previous review :) my most sincere apololigies, after i wrote my previous review i saw that you were from the UK, hence some of the language infused into the story. :( I am deeply sorry that I did not check my facts first and hope you were not offended in any way and if you are then my most deepest and sincere apologies, and once again i meant no harm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I'm new here, this is my first review i'll make it good :)...I LOVE IT! Its the type of thing ive been looking for in my writing, because all those other romances were either over the top or way to cliche, but yours is amazing. My only critique is you pay a little bit more attention to leaving out words I saw that quite a few times it happens to me too haha when my mind thinks faster than when i type. But its good your excited! And what time period is it set in because it seems that the language is centuries behind the time period, but thats all, Great story so far i look forward to reading more :) |
![]() ![]() Hey, like this chapter!But that's not unusual because I like all of the chapters! Haha This one was pretty uneventful but that's ok. Gotta have those ones in there to make the exciting ones seem even more exciting! :) Does she really have to leave school? Thatd be sad...and that was pretty bold of her to kiss Blake in front of her mom. She seems to be changing a lot and not liking her mom so much anymore.I feel like it's kinda a quick change. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! You updated! I knew if I kept moaning at you then you would! Hehe, great chapter Amaka! Update soon! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny my username never appears completely.. it gets annoying so I'm changing it. yay! you updated i'm so happy! i love the story so much! her mom is so unfair to her. she cant keep treating her like a baby forever she has to learn to deal with this kind of stuff on her own sometimes. my parents are not completely like that buit sometimes to overprotective i feel like slapping them at times. but i wouldnt of course. her mom though is annoying me but i had to laugh when she said until your twenty that was ridiculous! lol loved the chapter love blake. cant wait for more! update soon! |