Reviews for a city and its tower
lymli chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
I like the message in this, the last lines are hopeful.
instant bliss chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
And don't you think we'll say the same to our children some day too. Brilliant. I like your style of writing here - the central metaphor is clearly and beautifully outlined. I especially liked the description "painted with contradictions, / handwritten and bound by / prayers and atheism".