|Reviews for scar|
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
loved how you bolded the words. so creative
| diwu6398 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I completely fell in love with the style when I looked at the first poem, but then it was long and I'm tired, so I just picked another random poem. And so I picked the right one!
I read this, looking at the bold letters first, and I thought, 'why am I CHOOSING to put scars on my body when other people don't have the choice?' and so I was disgusted by myself.
I liked the choice of line breaks (I'm sorry, I forget the name for that :/) because they always seem to be perfectly arbitrary but at the same time tediously chosen.
The parentheses. My God, everyone tries to put parentheses in as a literary effect, but only you know how to do it well!
Fantastic job overall. I generally give better reviews (less word vomit and more critique) but as I said, I'm dead tired after having woken up at five and ran around all day so I'll just alert you for now and look back later.
| poison's such a girl thing chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
This was pretty good: it did require thought. (Haha, yeah? No. Okay.)
Anyway. This was good. I especially liked the last two lines; sort of sets the perspective for the whole thing.