|Reviews for Tool|
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Killer last line.
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I was confused as to the nature of this poem. There didn't seem to be a set "plot" to it and, while that's sometimes a good thing, it left me a little non-plussed here.
I also feel there are too many questions within the poem. They slow down the flow and I found they give the poem a heavy sort of feel, which really isn't comfortable to read.
-From the Review Marathon (check out the link in my profile)
| D. Cowman chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
you like tool. i like tool.
we are cool.
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
and this is it, exactly.
spent almost an hour earlier trying to explain my new hatred of logic to the boy, but no.
and yeah, and yeah,
girl, i've got it too.
(&&the song && the sun and the mood and the words and, you.
you are amazing. doubt that and i will... i don't know, some idle passing threat i suppose, but still - don't doubt it)
| lymli chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
I like the last lines, somtimes people can't think too much.
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
:( boy trouble?