Reviews for Beast in the Barrens |
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![]() ![]() Remind me not to read this again at one in the morning in the dark. I keep giving myself nightmares. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sam and Reese are adorable! I hope the truce lasts between Gwen and Evan...maybe even something more ;) ;) On to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() Wow scary! It seems that Gwen should have been more cautious, ghosts are less dangerous than giant cryptids, well apart from Widow Finley of course. But it is nice that this helped to improve Reese's relationship with Sam. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm impressed, not only are Sam and Reese adorable but this is properly scary. The image of the Jersey Devil right above them in the forest had me shaking. Love the idea of the slash-scooby doo thing, it works very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm craving a turkey sandwich. P |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is something I would do-go on a hunt for proof of the Jersey Devil, lol. That's my idea of entertainment. xD I lovelovelove this story. It's like the perfect mixture of creepiness and adorableness. :D I did kinda want to sacrifice Gwen to the Jersey Devil a couple times, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, i'm definetly going to look up how the jersey devil looks, sounds kind of weird.. my dislike for gwen has gotten worse, she's just so...uurgh! gotta ask though, were you fighting with a friend when you wrote this? cause it seems so real, lol. i'm glad she seems to be nicer to ewan, though i have to admit i hoped the jd would kill her .; the story is great but you should get it checked, there are some grammar mistakes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I really hope Gwen's change in attitude sticks. Permanently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Is awesome. :o You've got great writing skills! It draws me into the story. I wanna hug it. I can't wait till the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was honest to god one of the cutest stories i have ever read except for nearly pissing myself when the Jersey Devil jumped on the roof it was so adorable! XOXO Alysha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay xD Cant wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, so cute. damn museum, not taking their tape. i'm going to have fun guessing how the ghost coyote will come into play in the next story - that is, assuming it is going to be included. and i'm guessing it will be? just because you mentioned it here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ADORABLE. Damn people not believing Gwen, they're just haters. I'm excited there's another installment! Fantastic work : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evan is taming the beast! Woo hoo! And hm, I wonder where the phantom coyote is gonna come in. Maybe in the next segment? It seems to random to just be filler. Love these little stories. Really truly do. Can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok so ur story is fucking amazing i read the first one convington house and loved it and somehow this is even better. Love your work! xoxo Alysha |