Reviews for Beast in the Barrens
Zethoa chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
Eesh, this is way creepier than Covington House. I rather like it. ).

Wonder what the Jersey Devil actually looks like. Can't wait for a full description.
bridgettblah chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
Ep xDD Oh my GOSH, the Jersey Freaking Devil, is ON THEIR CAR
Gaweldr chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
Oh my god oh my god oh my god. SUSPENSE. I agree with you, the last chapter was very, very, very cool, and this one toot. (Okay this one is AWESOME.

Sam and Reese really are cute. I like the way there is no "I'm bigger than thou so I'm the one protecting you", they are hugging and calming each other. Sweet ) (to the point I can't tell if I prefer one or the other, what's really rare. It's Reese AND Sam, the item x) )

Because I'm a little pussy who can't watch Shaun of the dead alone in my house, the end of the chapter (and the dead coyote) give me the creeps. Okey, I know there is no wood near me, nor even coyotes in my country (unless in zoo, maybe) but...still !

Bref, really well done )

(Guessing : is Gwen a secret alpha werewolf who calm down after his rival submit ? :D)

Thanks for this chapter, and can't wait to read the next one ! I wish you Happy Christmas/St Nicholas/whatever till there )
HideAndGoSeek chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
Holy Hell! You can't stop there! You can't! Update soon! Update soon!

TinyMusicalShore chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
OMG CLIFFHANGER. More soon please.
TinyMusicalShore chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
Yay! Sam and Reese made up (out?)! That's exciting. I'm excited for the next chapter/s. : )
Zethoa chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
Sam's shyness makes him strangely adorable. I'm glad they've made up. Now I just wanna know what Gwen's found.

In the interest of constructive crit and stuff, I hope we get a bit more of the backstory on Chris, instead of him being this vague bogeyman.
HideAndGoSeek chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
AW! I lovfe it! best one yet! I kept expecting for the JD to pop out out of nowhere lol

Update soon! They're just too cute together!

bridgettblah chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
Aw!Yay for Sam being Sam! I cant wait to see what Gwen has...
Zethoa chapter 3 . 12/4/2010
I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that Sam's just being a wuss and he secretly wants to jump Reese's bones.

And GOD, please give Gwen some sort of sympathetic rationality or something. Because noone is that obnoxious. NOONE.

I'm really excited for what comes next. )
HideAndGoSeek chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
That shadow part was freakishly cool and now I'm looking over my shoulder! I love the chapter and story and now I can see what you meant when you said that it was slow moving. Update soon!

mandrake-o chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
I like this story so far. It's pretty awesome.

And I like that it's slower moving than the first one. I think the fact that you like it more shows. I think I like it more, too.

) Mandraco.
bridgettblah chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
Aw, what's wrong with Sam? Cant wait for more!
Gaweldr chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
Owe, they are so cute _ I don't really like Gwen... for now. Maybe later, if she stop being...well...Gwenish XD

(hot chocolate -hot chocolate kind of guys- rulz teh world !)

Thanks for this really nice chapter, and I'm so eager to read what happen next !

Zethoa chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
So I only found this because I happened to be roaming around the wide world of fictionpress. Otherwise, I never would have known. You might wanna put something in Covington Houseto help direct people over here. )

And gosh, Sam is freakishly adorable in his awkwardness. It makes me smile.

But Gwen... hmm. I hope you have more of a character background on her, because at the moment she's shallow and dislikeable. And I hate it when shallow characters are actually shallow, because that's no fun.

Can't wait to see what happens next!
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