|Reviews for Delonia: A Short Story|
| YoungAndLiving chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
That was extraordinary.
| I love this story chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
this story was amazing to read, i actually felt so sad when she didnt remember again ): well done, amazing work (: x
| CelestialWolven chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
I have to be honest. Kind of mediocre. Your grammar and punctuation could use some real fine-tuning.
| zagato chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
This is a beautiful story, but it is so sad. Thank you and please write more.