|Reviews for Of Quasi—Bootstrapped Time|
| bikerbyheart chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Whoa this was so cool! I have no ide what the middle stanza means, but it just sounds so awsome!
I THINK what you're trying to do in that stanza is use scientific definitions and meanings to define something that can't be defined (love). "Wisps of cerebral torchings" reminds me of love in teh sense that it lights up parts of your cortex, but then you go off and confuse me again with the next two lines.
You seem to be saying that you cannot describe what's happening to you, and so you're using what language you do know (getting this from the first two lines).
Eh. I love it, just wish I understood it more! But that's not really your problem, is it? If it makes sense to you, then that's great.