Reviews for frustration
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Finally! I am reviewing! So sorry for it being so late XD Right, to work. I think the emotions that you convery are apparent and many a reader can understand the emotions that the writer is trying to express. This is a clear indication that the writing is good. It reveals something of a mask that many people portrey while also the hidden fears. The writing in italics would be my favourite part because it is very true to life. I must be honest, I really like that part. Nice writing! :)
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Very expressive, and very emotional. 'Not finish my dreams' is sweet. The intentional excessive use of swear words also brings out the pain and emotion of the writing, and what you must be going through.

Overall, it leaves a very strong impression on the reader - as it did to me.

Great job!

Keep writing!
Dove Dinell chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
This is very powerful. My favorite part is "hugs wasn't awkward or had to mean something". I can SO relate to that and it is like the epitome of relationships messing up friendships, put succinctly, just like poetry should.

Thanks for giving me a review! I'm adding you to my favorites.