|Reviews for Memories|
| StoryMonster chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I liked it!
I was really sentimental, and I TOTALLY feel like that.
| Aanaleigh chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Very sweet, I liked it. Especially since this is what I've been doing a lot lately. College next year..
Anyway... on to other things.
In the memory:
[Samantha licked them off her face]
She couldn't really be licking marshmallows off her face, not exactly possible.
[an absent smile crept up to her mouth]
You need different adjective instead of absent. Absent is define as not existing, so if she has an absent smile, then she's not really smiling at all.
Other than those two things, it was really well done.
Great job Alexis!