|Reviews for A Decoration in Unshaken Polaroids|
| DaddyLonglegs chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
Reading this is like being drunk.
I have no clue what's going on but it doesn't matter because it's really fucking awesome.
Sorry. I will try to give this the eloquent review it deserves.
I like the way you use language the most. And the tortoise thing was dark and deep and scary and cool and beautiful all at once. I would give you advice on how to make it better but I don't think you can. My favourite bit was when you said "Dad sighs from the bags of alcohol under his lashes".
And the american dream toothpaste. That was clever. You went all John Steinbeck on this story for a minute :L
| DaddyLonglegs chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Oh my goodness.
Oh my goodness, WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE REVIEWS?
THIS IS FANTASTIC.
THIS IS AMAZING.
Fool, you better update some more. I love this :)