hmm i don't know what to think about the triange zander-charlie- bryce yet. i usually like the love story to be clear, you know who ends up with whom . But i think i'm going to keep a mind open about this one...

anddddd... i knew it! da vinci is bryce right? and seriously ? zander told charlie all kind of things, couldn't he tell her about billie or the fact that there are some beings that are going to be offended if you insult them?

(i still think eli is her father! :D ) i was really sad for barnes though and mills

while billie is right she's a bitch or have a bitchy attitude? i want to see her face when charlie is going to be able to do majic

i definitely think bryce is alive! i wonder though if they know him and who he is?

i'm pretty sure there are some minor mistakes on the previews chapters and here but i'm so captivated by your story that i forget them immediately

ho ho ho joan athen is super cool!

I would have really like to see charlie kick that girls ass ;)

hmm do royalty shake hands? oh and i like the linkk between them

i hope they made it safe!

so now he also knows bryce? i love how the story develops!

O.0 is eli her father ? or is my imagination running wild?

Hmm well zander too "smooth" for me :) but likeable still.

hey since she's royalty should he get inside her head? i would have whipped his ass if he'd done that to me! really cool story btw

i like charlie's humor and attitude! and even though it's the cliche story you made the princess totally different from what we 'd expect!