Reviews for Shallow
H.R. Spade chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
No clue why I can't log in.

Anyway, I thought this was pretty good. Is it freeverse?

-H.R. Spade
laurenmlbc chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I like this a lot...very good job on the descriptions. Shallowness is definitely one of my pet peeves. Great poem!
imissyoudearly chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
If only you knew how much that's helped me get through today. :)
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Loved this. It was taking that same idea and morphing it from something inanimate to real people. And you are very much right. Shallow people can be unbearable sometimes.