HEY! long time no fictionpress. lmao. so i got bored and thats what led me here. ha. nice chapter. short tho... i have no idea what you plan to do now. hopefully you got some crazy drama thought up for the schoolyear! the summer ending for them is sad tho. lol soo anywayss! i should write some more too. maybe i will. idk idk idk. probably. im babbling. i think the next time ill see you is like..emilys birthday? so yea lol see ya soon couz! :) byee

I REALLY hope this isn't the last you write of this night lol bc its just so darn cute :D

It's really good and keep writing but there are some grammar errors so maybe u should take a look at those

How old is Damean? lol

Good job! I wanted to cry for march lol its so sad.. I also felt bad for Louis! They were soo close to being together. Lol. Well I know you'll make it right.:)

I really like this story, but you included one of my biggest pet peeves. Defiantly is NOT definitely. It's in the second line in the second paragraph.

Vivien, though slightly bitchy, does have the right of way at the moment...

Ah! Good job :) you left it at a trivial point tho... I wanna know what happens with Louis! Write quickly lol

Aww... lol cute chapter :) They hugged!

Hey lilred! lol its your cousin again. :) This is my pen name. So you can check out my story. p.s about this chapter, i think i know where this is going lol. :) Good stuff... see you on christmas!

Hey! its your cousin! great job! i hope you see this. i love this story. :)

This is awesome! please continue :)

this is amazing, exactly the sorta book i wud pick up n buy in a shop xx

I love this.I like Marcella and I also like the name itself.I'd like to know how this ends :)

i like the quiet significance of "grabbed all the money i had and got out of the house."

i think for most people thats a regular occurance. i like how you made it stand for something.