Reviews for The Boy on the Beach
Justashley chapter 13 . 5/4/2011
HEY! long time no fictionpress. lmao. so i got bored and thats what led me here. ha. nice chapter. short tho... i have no idea what you plan to do now. hopefully you got some crazy drama thought up for the schoolyear! the summer ending for them is sad tho. lol soo anywayss! i should write some more too. maybe i will. idk idk idk. probably. im babbling. i think the next time ill see you is like..emilys birthday? so yea lol see ya soon couz! :) byee
Justashley chapter 12 . 1/18/2011
I REALLY hope this isn't the last you write of this night lol bc its just so darn cute :D
Hi chapter 12 . 1/16/2011
It's really good and keep writing but there are some grammar errors so maybe u should take a look at those
Justashley chapter 11 . 1/1/2011
How old is Damean? lol
Justashley chapter 10 . 12/29/2010
Good job! I wanted to cry for march lol its so sad.. I also felt bad for Louis! They were soo close to being together. Lol. Well I know you'll make it right.:)
safirefairy13 chapter 7 . 12/29/2010
I really like this story, but you included one of my biggest pet peeves. Defiantly is NOT definitely. It's in the second line in the second paragraph.
safirefairy13 chapter 4 . 12/29/2010
Vivien, though slightly bitchy, does have the right of way at the moment...
Justashley chapter 8 . 12/27/2010
Ah! Good job :) you left it at a trivial point tho... I wanna know what happens with Louis! Write quickly lol
Justashley chapter 7 . 12/23/2010
Aww... lol cute chapter :) They hugged!
Justashley chapter 6 . 12/22/2010
Hey lilred! lol its your cousin again. :) This is my pen name. So you can check out my story. p.s about this chapter, i think i know where this is going lol. :) Good stuff... see you on christmas!
Ashhhh chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Hey! its your cousin! great job! i hope you see this. i love this story. :)
crescentmaiden77 chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
This is awesome! please continue :)
xxxZOExxxPHEBExxx chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
this is amazing, exactly the sorta book i wud pick up n buy in a shop xx
fairytopia27 chapter 5 . 12/16/2010
I love this.I like Marcella and I also like the name itself.I'd like to know how this ends :)
Goldenstars chapter 2 . 12/15/2010
i like the quiet significance of "grabbed all the money i had and got out of the house."

i think for most people thats a regular occurance. i like how you made it stand for something.
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