Reviews for The Old Days
Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Me Too! I wanna go back to the Good Old Days, too! Long live the 90s!

I love the "Where obsessions were nothing,"

and "Self-consciousness was non-existent,"

lines..

Because I have a big problem with self-consciousness...childhood really triggers that kind of thinking, doesn't it?

5/5
C. Tattiana H-H chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like the message of this poem. I definitely feel you on it, which made it enjoyable to read. I really liked the last line, as well, because it gave the poem purpose, more than just pointing out what had changed and what you would like to be. I think it was a strong way to end and definitely had a lasting impression.

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The lone canine chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
This poem speaks volumes and has a huge meaning to it. Very well written and very good. Great job!