Reviews for Young Parent
Willis123 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I feel the whole basis and topic of this story is a little overplayed. Yes, I understand it's traumatic, tragedy causing. But its a little cliche. Something you'd see a teenage girl reading on a park bench and then chatting with her friends about it. But I suppose that's not such a bad thing. As long as it is read, yes?
black.magic89 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
This is a good first chapter hope you continue!
InkyPink chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Whoa, she's an idiot, once he'd let her go in the truck why didn't she just escape and break up with him from a distance! Though, yeah, he might have just attacked her another time. Anyway. This is very well written, I hope you're planning to continue!