Reviews for That Little Voice
Self-DissectedPsyche chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Christian overtones? I'd imagine. That little voice must be heavy and malicious, demonic in its power. The last line really strikes me, it's a sign that you've been molested by this voice, but that you're still clinging to life. There room to rebuild, and life left to fight back. Interesting.
Tapioca-Robot chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I like the idea that you are so filled with something (Lies in this case) that it leaves you empty somehow. Very powerful notion. Stating how "it sneaks up on me" really portrays you as an innocent victim, which lends itself to drawing in the reader. Dark, sad, with deep implications. And thus very interesting.