Reviews for Saving Smiles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol absolutely loved this story. 2 me it was a mix of Oliver queen as the green arrow in smallvile with Lois lane and batman of course! Lol but I absolutely loved it n Andies attitude n Christian! Eeeekkkkkkkkamazing! Very talented writer |
![]() ![]() I love that little bit with William! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it wrong that I squealed at the part where the Enigma comes in? Ah well, I read Fatal Attraction first, which was the man purpose of reading this story, which is really good by the way. Thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very good. I love it. It's kind of like Batman in a way. You did beautifully on your writing that I was drawn in from the very first sentence of the first chapter. (That is good writing to me.) Loved your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The love story between Andie and Christian I loved but the superhero thing kinda killed it for me but each to there own was still a good read :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I really love this story. I like it that Christian is a masked vigilante but you don't write about that side of his life unless Andie is directly involved in it. I also like how you wrote the epilogue. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a great story! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() I Loved this story a few years back. And I still do! |
![]() ![]() And you know what? |
![]() ![]() I remember reading this before! |
![]() ![]() The quote so should have been"So… I hear you met Andie when you were her teacher in high school. Do have a thing for fourteen year olds, or was she just special?" |
![]() ![]() This story is similar to 50 shades of Grey... It is bad to plagiarize! |
![]() ![]() Dear Lady Femme Fatale :) I really enjoyed reading Saving Smiles! Thanks for sharing your work with us -. I liked the characters and their chemistry together. Not sure how the whole enigma/shadow and Onyx worked in-since it was very similar to scenes from The Dark Knight; was this meant to be a partial fanfic? I think you could explore this story in two ways- either go more into the whole superhero phase and get Andie more involved earlier on; or even consider removing it altogether as it doesn't contribute a great deal to the relationship of the story. Just a suggestion. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! |
![]() ![]() Love love love this story! Christian is perfect (maybe a little too perfect? O.o) and Andie is hilarious! I have some unanswered questions. What happened with Renita and Jess? And why did Andie stop talking to her? I like to think they ended up with more than 4 children! :') I know, crazy but it fits them. Thanks for the brilliantly well-written story with great grammar! Huzzah! 3 |