Reviews for Saving Smiles
Kitty Howell chapter 3 . 10/27/2011
At the beginning of this chapter, I was really happy to see that she can hold her tongue, lol.

I'm really happy to get some insight on Andie's life and why she really has no patience for Christian. Her understanding of her family and their decicions in life shows just how mature she was when she was younger, which gives off the idea that she's actually quite mature now, despite her fits.

Yay, she got the job, lol! :D So it was her honesty, huh? Wonder what else her honesty will get her ;D
Kitty Howell chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
I wonder what it was about her that really stuck with him. Her fire, not being swept off her feet, or her honesty. Or perhaps a combination? She certainty doesn't seem like the type of girls he's usually around. Which is defiantly good.

It's kinda cute to see McHale so...flustered? He probably isn't used to that, and it isn't what I imagined for him being a playboy and all. It's adorable :D

I am loving these chapter quotes you're doing. I don't write for this website often, more so for fanfiction. I may start doing them myself. As long as you don't mind it, of course, lol.

And I see her fire is still there! I'm loving it. :D
Kitty Howell chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Andie was very, very angry...Lol

She had a really bad day, but I hope she keeps that fire in further chapters.

I really like this so far, though the only thing that bothers me is there wasn't breaks through scenes. Took me a few seconds to catch up.

I'm gonna read and review every chapter(I hope)sometimes I forget when it's complete. I'll do my best!
leavesfallingup chapter 40 . 10/26/2011
This was truly an excellent read. I read it straight through, clicking Next as soon as I reached the end of each chapter; so I did not give you the chapter-by-chapter review that your story deserved.

Perhaps later I will go back and re-read it and make up for that omission.

Great story.

LFU
akaCHEEKS chapter 39 . 10/7/2011
I just finished reading this story and I cannot get enough of it. It's way too cute!
akaCHEEKS chapter 6 . 10/6/2011
Apparently me and Marissa (who, by the way, is my personal assistant; don't ask, I don't get it either) are going to an underground burlesque

I think what you're looking for is this little sign: "-" I don't know exactly know what they're called but I do know that you use them for whenever someone is speaking but introduced a new topic in between their sentences. Like when they cut themselves off, go on tangent and then go back to their original topic.

For example it should have been "Apparently Marissa and I-who by the way is my personal assistant; don't ask, I don't get it either-are going to an underground burlesque group..."

I also fixed your comma mistake there if you notice. and Marissa and I unless you want to keep her speaking voice dominant and write the way she speaks then keep it as "me and Marissa".
Araglin chapter 40 . 9/29/2011
I absolutely loved it! It was very well paced and the relationship between Andie and Christian was really well written. The whole thing was really well written actually haha. Hope to read more from you soon!

~E.
UbiquityEssence chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Lovely story !
SecretPassion chapter 10 . 8/21/2011
I know I'm not that far into this story but i feel as if it is just hopping around the plot. There is too much going on, too much just stick with one plot plan and dont have a billion different dramas going on
Eternal Skies chapter 9 . 7/19/2011
I know how the rain can feel liberating. Last time it rained -months ago : P- I just went out and started doing all crazy hooligan crap. I was soaked through but I didn't give two shits about it or the fact that I might've caught a cold, all I was feeling was pure bliss and happiness. So corny but true.

I'm not sure about the pacing, it seems like Chris is getting attached to her fast and now I'm wondering if he's just starting to like her that way because she

s basically refreshing or because he can be himself with her or both. Still, I liked how Chris just let go and tried to have fun. It shows that he doesn't really choose to be thos brooding guy and that the people around him are the ones that are actually restricting..
Eternal Skies chapter 7 . 7/19/2011
OMG, you did not just do -write- that! Talk about epic embarrassment anddl humiliation!

I can't imagine Andie going all cheap and singing this song. Hehe but I guess it's going to happen anyway, huh? I just hope I don't squeal. Much.
Eternal Skies chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
I can't believe you don't have like a hundred or three hundred reviews because this is one of the most mature stories I've read on FP. The narrator is a little professional-sounding, which comes off as somehow emotionally dettached, but it (narrator) serves purely as a storyteller in the fashion 'tell it like it is' though a little humor or insight would've been a pretty neutralizing element to add to your narration :)

I totally loved how genuine and believable McHale's interest-slash-attraction to Andie was. It's perfectly realistic, unlike some other stories that drive me up a wall as I wonder why the lead guy is even interested in the lead girl.

Anyway, I only read like two chapters so I don't want be quick to judge but I kind of alreay did that ;P
Ellybeth chapter 19 . 6/23/2011
You must really love Christian Bale because using a story line like batman and his characters name "Patrick Bateman" from American Psycho. props.
Ice Bubble chapter 40 . 6/14/2011
OMG! This story was soooooo cute! I actually prefer it to The Four Sides Of A Triangle or something like that. *bad memory regarding names*

This summer, I want to read all of your uploaded work! 3
konichiwa2u chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
LOL
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