Reviews for My Almost Wedding Day
hopeless romantic2aT chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Great start. I would have liked to see more of a buildup of her emotions for him. It kind of seemed like it went straight from HATE to "oh, I've loved him all these years". But awesome nonetheless. Other than your grammar issues you mentioned, this is a highly interesting idea for a story. As I was reading the part with Stacy pretending to be Sarah as Jake talked to her, I was totally thinking of masquerades how people could just wear some mask covering their eyes and no one would know who they really were, or Shakespeare, how someone could just dress like a guy and have no clue they are really a woman. It was very interesting.
Romantix chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
AGAIN.

make a series/saga :)
SillyBanana chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Hey!

Ok, first of all, it was great! The beginning is really interesting and it'll make a great story.

Please continue,

SillyBanana
hehehaha94 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
nice one shot... ) very fluffy haha XD