What's the point of putting anything on here, I had to read to chapter bloody 7 and then I realized that it was all gone and for sale! This forum is not for advertising your work (which I think is very selfish), it's for having your work free and open to the public. You have a blog use it!

i really love this story..

i love Kieron, i love how u described him! he's so dedicated to his small family and though he leads a harsh life he never lets the burden fall on his sister! i would marry him if i could.. plus he's super hot!

Hey really miss you on here. Hope you won't forget your faithful readers on here when you make it :) We believe in you.

I really love your stories and I would love to get the free book I just dont know the author name. I am also getting a nook color for christmas so it would be lovely if I could have a copy waitin on me. Rocked By Passion was an amazing story. It really had me actually looking forward to a Monday morning of college and an amazing story.

So, what is up with his face? I'm dyin' to know. Literally. I'm dyin' from suspense. It's possible. Possibly. C'mon. Tell me, tell me, tell me, tellllll meeeeee! Is it in the next chapter or the next or the next? Well that's all that's on my mind. So far the story seems good. Bye

P.S. Please let the description of his face be in the next chapter. Or I'll die. That's one fan lost! Oh and maybe you should put what his curse is and what exactly makes him an outcast (besides his face) in an earlier chapter so it let's us readers understand him more. Yes he's cursed and yes he's a freak but why? That's all I'm asking. Bye. Fo' reals this time

I love the way that you write! It's so descriptive but not to the point that I feel bombarded by words. I really like Kieron, even though he is so different from the other male leads you've written. I have such a hard time writing male characters as narrators, and I think you do such a great job at it. I would try to write a longer review because I love what I've read so much, but I can't wait to go on to the next chapter!

I can't believevthe story has ended! I truly enjoyed reding this one! I would have loved to see the characters from seared hy desire come out, but i realized that thwy really did not fit in to the story... The characters, i found them to be more complex than the ones from seared by desire. I guess i never took into account hpw different their lives could have been if lucian had not been a vampire leader... It was a pleasure having read this. If it won't offend you, i like these elemental series better than the wolf ones... Its just for some odd reason i find these characters more believable. Their insecurities as well as their connections and actions all seem more approachable.

Happy writings! Wil look for you on kindle...

I'm more of a fanfiction fan, but recently I got bored and decided to come here. Glad I did! This is an incredible story. Original, well written and interesting, I'm really glad I came here. I'm dying to know what's under that hood! And about that plagarizing...just reading it makes my blood boil! Since I'm still on Chapter 5, I don't know what's going on with that, but I hope you dealt with it. Or someone told that thief about herself. Anyway, sorry this is anonymous. As an avid writer, I too love reviews, and it irritates me when someone gives a review I can't reply to, but It's 3:00 in the morning and I REALLY don't wanna get an account...*cough*LAZY*cough* Love the story.

I beg you for a sequel. Oh...And please keep updating Whirlwind. I really do enjoy your work. I finished this a couple of months ago and I stayed up late into the morning to finish it. Definitely worth the chewing out I got from my Geometry Teacher. Well good luck and Happy Writing. John Andrist

You're a really talented writer! I hope that some day in the future, I'll get to read published books of your stories. And possibly more! Keep it up and never stop writing. 3

Im not being ruse or anything, im just pointing out that in the last chapter you say Kieron's mother was called rachel,and then in this chapter you say her name is christina so im a little confused

Holy crap! it's been freaking forever since i reviewed your chapters! i'm really sorry about that. Every time i would read a chapter it would be at my work and the login page is blocked, meaning i can't review. i'm sorry!

Anyway. i loved this! Keiron was awesome! I love the name Luna and what it represents! that was clever on your part! I'm glad everything worked out for the best. Will we ever see these two again? What about Lucian and Sarah was it? it's been forever since Seared by Desire that i've almost forgotten the names of the characters. I really would love to see all the "cursed" ones show up in the last book and meet. It would be really neat! Have you ever given it a thought?

Well i'm off to the next book! i can't wait for whirlwind of Pleasure! my Lycans are back! YUMMY! i can't wait to see how these characters are different from the A Wolf's Duty and so on series!

I just wanted to mention that i reviewed your stories over on amazon! my name is different on there than on here, but i'm yoursisinchrist on there. I hope the feedback helped you! Well i'm off to the next book! tootles!

i absolutely love this story it's awesome but so are all your other stories. Can't wait to read Whirlwind of Pleasure. I'm sure it will rock too.

some constructive feedback just occurred to me! i know you decided not to write an epilogue, but i hope you'll reconsider your decision. i feel that the story feels a little incomplete without an epilogue, and im not the kind of reader who feels unsatisfied without an epilogue. it's simply that the story seems incomplete, with a few strings loose, if you get what i mean. reading the story as a whole in the span of a few days, i remember quite a few details, and one that i inferred from various bits in the plot is that kieron would become a very powerful king. the way you ended was very nice for the moment, but i think the story might seem more complete if you added an epilogue set years in the future when he and estraya are rulers.

taking into consideration your desire to have them appear in another story... if they're just going to appear a little and be minor characters in this new story, i think you should add an epilogue for this one. but if they're going to be pretty key characters in this other story, which is presumably part of the elemental series, then the epilogue is not needed though it would still be nice to make the story a little more complete.

i totally understand the timeline issue though. im working on ONE book (not posted yet) and im dying trying to track everything. i actually have a separate file tracking the main events in each chapter. maybe something like that could help you? only a file covering all your books to track the different timelines? it would be hard work creating the file as you'd have to read through everything you've written all over again, but you might find it worth your while.

well, just some feedback. i hope it's useful! whether or not you decide to write that epilogue in the end, this is still an amazing piece of work! :)

you are such an amazing writer! your use of words is BEAUTIFUL. im sure you will be published one day! maybe you'll sell movie rights! and it's awful that people plagiarise your work, but on the bright side, imitation has been said to be the highest form of flattery :) anyway, all the best in your publishing endeavours!