excellent chapter! however, i know the drama cannot possibly be over

aw love this chapter

Way to go keiron...:)

how many chapters are left and whose story will you be telling next and will you take another small month-long break between this and your next story? anyways - AWESOME chapter, i loved it, keep up the amazing work

Amir needs to seriously die. I hope they stay together from now on, even thouh that may not be possible.

best chapter ever :D

Kieron is really cute. He's just like "Noo.. I'm the bad guy! I just know it!". LOL.

This is just another wonderful chapter in general. It's got a great pace, and the rhythm rocks like a cradle! It's good!

Cannot wait for the next update!

x

I am loving this story. I anxiously await more chapters. I also noticed that the things the oracle said Keiron needs to be free spells mate.

NOO! Poor Kieron! :( I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Oh noes!

D:

Seriously? We have to wait till next monday? I am crying...

LOL

Good Job!

Aw, poor Kieron. I can't blame him for reacting like that, if only he knew the truth. Intense chapter, I really enjoyed it! I wasn't expecting any of that to happen so I'm real excited to see what happens next. Good luck as well with work!

Hi! That was a nice chapter! But my only criticism is that kieron accepted the situation way too easily. I mean come on, we've been shown times and times again that he's smart and sharp. How could he have been fooled so easily? that bit adds drama to the story but doesnt really seem realistic.

:'(

how did i know that she was going to get caught?

Poor Kieron, I can't wait until hes happy again.

This is such a great story though. :)