Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while I have been busy with college at the moment. I cannot wait for the next chapter and if if the villagers I would run for the hills to escape from the wrath of Kieron. I was a fan of the Wolf series and this series is even better. Hope the job problem gets resolved quickly and that it works out for the better.

As always your Humble Servant

Shinigami RULES!

I Hate to criticize, but I was really disappointed in this chapter and overall in this turn of events in the story. The self-sacrifice, "I'm going to lie that I don't like you so you'll leave" thing is so incredibly overdone and pathetic in regards to their supposed connection and love. It also changed the characters for me- Keirons reaction, considering his previous doubt, was fine. But Estraya was replaced by the stereotypical, melodramatic, weak heorine. Her logic in how this is going to protec Keiron also seems to be full of hopes in terms o what is spelled out for the reader. Regardless, I await the next instalment and hope to see you return to the inventive andtalented writer you are.

This is horrid! It almost made me cry and then you just leave us there till next Monday! ACH! I want more... You rwriting is amazing and I read too fast and the little tid bits every wek are too little. I love it. I love the betrayal. I love the fact that your story has twists and isn't cliche.

Aww! This is a sad chapter, poor Kieron. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

oh dear, oh dear, oh dear... that is NOT good, not good at all... *mumbles to self and sighs* what people do for love. Can you please kill Amir, and in such a gruesome yet dumb manner that no one gives a shit but rather everyone laughs their asses off that he lacked the grace to die in a manner more sophisticated? unfortunately, Kieron's being silly.

too lazy to log in. I love a good scene like this, lots of DRAMA ;)

Kieron needs to listen to Ermete more often, it would save him a lot of heartache. Estraya's doing the right thing though even if she's hurting him. Good update :D

i loved this story till this chapter. i seriously hate Amir.

There are no words for this chapter. All i can say was that i cried my heart out.

Great chapter

The story is going great, i kind of expected this to happen... Monday seems so long away now,... Update soon.

Another amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

m mmgmmhmhmm hmfgmm thats the only thing that can come to mind, that chapter was painful, mhymhmhm6yhm, :( Stupid asshole. KIERON I LOVE YOU AND SO DOES ESTRAYA! KILL THAT DAMNEDD KING AMIR NOW! GRAWR ... if you can't tell. I am angry. :( But good chappie, Ermete was trying to tell Kieron that she was in pain and that she loved him :P

omg i hate n love this chapter at the same time...ahh so traditional having her hurt him to save him. but the emotion n how it was written was great. but wat pissess me off is how could he just not see that something was up. regardless of what he saw. she was obveously stressed n scared of this man. gr...he was just looking for any excuse to think she would b really rid of him.

ah keep on writing!

take care

No! Keiron come back! No! I hate Amir, I want to kill him!

Great chapter and I don't think I can wait another week for the next chapter! ahh. Please update soon.