Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

this story is so great. i absolutely love it. Kieron and Estraya are great together. I hadnt ever seen tht spelling for Kieran b4. its perfect. very unique.

this is bad.. i have a feeling that estraya will be captured by the evil king

Estraya is an idiot.

But then, she's in love, and love makes idiots of even the most sensible how, despite knowing that, I'm still surprised at how stupid characters-and people, mind you-can be. I liked the chapter, although it definitely isn't my favorite, but you're setting the stage for something akin to a capture or some other drama coming soon :3 despite my dislike for the stupidity of a lover, I can't wait for the next update xD

Lovely chapter, I adored his concern and worry for her. I'm so glad he wants to protect her and keep her safe from that husband of hers, hopefully he never finds her. In the mean time, it's nice to know she doesn't have to leave him either... that would suck. Fantastic chapter, I can't wait for the next one and don't worry about not getting the promotion... you'll get one at the next job. ;)

I'm crossing my fingers that she doesn't get caught!

I like the idea of the jewels representing eternity. I never would have guessed it. Good job!

Great chapter

this is my fav elemental spirits stories its so cute :P and kool chapter on with the next one lol

Oh my, I am bubbling with excitement! :D Tangled is a great movie, anyways this was an amazing chappie, it covered all the right bases and left me wanting mre :) Can't wait till next week!

she's going to get caught.. amir's going to catch her..

ahh i can't read the next chapter :O

I must admit, the story had a slow start for me but being a fan of yours i knew it would get better and sure enough ut did. I love how your characters have grown since the beginning.

I never would have thought of Kieron's face affecting people. Good job :)

I miss the holiday season, because thats when you do 2 updates a week :P Great chapter Im reading it twice, I was half asleep when I read it the first time. Even better the second time around :)

I freaking love them! It's so amazing how much Kieron loves Estraya