What did he do? Not knowing is killing me, not to mention whats under his hood! Cant wait for the next update, hopefully we'll find out more. Keep up the good work! :)

I haven't read the Seared for Desire story simply because sometimes, i need a break from vampires lol. But I read this story within 2 days and I love it! Cannot wait for the next chapter :)

Another great chapter! I look forward to the next one!

Your stories are fresh and interesting, with strong characters and good mechanics. Each one is better than the last. Truly, I can't wait to see where this story leads. Write on!

Well they finally acknowledged that they are alittle in love with each other :) that's good. Maybe Keiron will look like the Phantom of the Opera? Or maybe he just thinks he looks terrible and Estraya will love it.

That was so hot! I loved it, he's so sweet with her. I'm glad they're getting closer to each other and more intimate. I have a few ideas of what he might look like but I'm not going to say, lol. I can't wait to find out though, great work. I'm looking forward to the next one!

That was a pleasure to read and Estraya last words are promising. Till next time. Bye.

thanks for the update! i actually think kieron looks good underneath his veil but he just thinks he looks horrible

What a great chapter! Now I really can't wait to see what Keiron looks like, and I'm even more curious to see how that will happen!

I can't wait to see what Kieron looks like! :) Boy was this chapter steamy! :) Great job, as always! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Trees have become this consistent hopeful sign for the two of them. I'm keen on the two of them really becoming more safe and secure with each other, because of the abuses they've faced. this story has turned out to be so different from your others and I congratulate you for stepping out of your comfort zone (as you're prone to do) and successfully creating two unique characters.

that. was. friggin. adorable! I lvoe kieron's dedication to her and her happiness, and, while Estraya's isn't quite as obvious, she has it, too. I lvoe their itneractions, the fierce determination that sometimes makes them clash. it's fantastic. The last sentence in your first paragraph sounded sort of awkward to me, but after that I was too engrossed in your writing to notice it otherwise. amazing.

oh, and kieron makes me think brown, but not normal brown. warm, soothing, perhaps reddish or even with strokes of green in it. that'd be cool xD for some reason, i picutre him with a scar or a tattoo or something running down from his left eye to about his chin, thin, but really noticeable all the same. and weird eyes. but that's jsut me goin' nuts xD

Another amazing chapter :D I think Kieron won't look as bad as he think he does. I think somehow Estraya will look pass whatever she sees under the hood and still love him. Then again that's just me. :D

Well congratulations on getting with Kindle. I've had the chance to go that rout with my publishers, but unfortunately they wanted an out outrageous amount of money for it to go that route so unfortunately my book is still only available in soft cover, and even that is an out outrageous amount but they wont change the price. Oh well, I'm hopping to find a better publisher soon, yes getting it published for free was awesome, but the prices are disgusting.

Any way, on to the review of the chapter.

I can't believe that it's Amer that's Estraya's husband. I hope Kieron kills the bastard in the end. I know it might create a war, but I still hop he kills the bastard. And why would Kieron automatically think that killing Estraya would upset her? Especially when she was calling for him after he left so abruptly?

I somehow imagined him with dark hair. Maybe reddish brown... Anyway, he is awesome regardless of what he looks like.:)