I keep coming back every day to see if you gave us a *surprise* chapter... which I know you probably won't. But still... a girl can hope right?

I've fallen hopelessly in love with all of your stories and I think i got spoiled when you use to update twice a week :-P maybe you should try spoiling me again... or not.

anyway, just wanted you to know i'm still reading and waiting.

love from arkansas!

fucking amazing

I think that the story is finally moving along alittle. I'm glad Kieron finally learned the truth about Estraya's feelings :) can't wait for Monday!

lol I loved that ending line. So did my boyfriend. He says he's completely on Kiron's side.

Any way, when will the two of them get together as more than friends? It's clearly gonna happen.

Aww that was so sweet. A little heart-breaking somehow, but adorable nonetheless. I can't wait to read more!

Aw, this chapter was so sweet! I can't wait for the next one!

I'm not really good with reviews so this is my best attempt:

That was a really go chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)

(See how horrid that was?)

~BB

good they r finally together...

thanks for the update

I've read all your stories and I love them all. But I think this one is my favorite so far. I hope you never stop writing!

Aw this chapter was cute he just keeps getting cuter and cuter!

~Obsession

We're getting beneath the armour sort of now and the boundaries they had are gone, which was pretty crucial, so the possibilities are endless.

A little on the short side but still totally awesome! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Aw, that was sweet. I love how she kept reassuring him that he's not a monster and she cares for him regardless of how he sees himself. That was perfect. I'm glad they're going to give it a try at a relationship, I bet they won't be disappointed either. Fantastic work, can't wait for the next one!

I really like that your embracing a new type of plot and deriving from your norm. The pace is kind of slow and Kieron is shrouded in mystery, but I have reread over your story from the first chapter to this one and now that I am not reading the story one chapter at a time and once a week, I am able to embrace the story much better. I can see how to plot is progressing and I enjoy how Kieron and Estraya have a particularly strong bond that does not rely on the physical aspect of the relationship. [Though I am looking foward to those parts ;)]

After reading this chapter I feel like you have finished laying out your foundation for the story and can finally dive more into the world you have created. Looking foward to the next chapter! :)