I like this story better than Sara and Lucian's, actually. The plot is wonderful; in fact, I'm VERY interested in the plot of this story. What are Kieron's special powers? What's with his hood thing? Most importantly, what's he going to do about Estraya and Amir? Oh, and I think that the wolf is a nice touch. Perhaps, though, you could have elaborated a bit more on the shape or design of the mark Kieron put on it. You're doing great so far, so I don't really know why other people don't appreciate this story as well as Sara and Lucian's.

This story is very different from your last ones. the character in this one have a dynamic past so there actions are very different. I agree that you are getting better as a writer; for sure. Because no one could ever make a story like this up and execute it the way you have.

I like this story more than lucian's and sara's, but i wish we got to hear more of kieron's elemental!

Quite honestly,I am liking this story so much that I might even like a little bit better than Sara and Lucien's story! :) But some people may not be reviewing as much because I think that there is a little less action so far than in Sara's story. :) I hope that that helps you and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

thanks for the update! she finally goes to his house...

I love that Estraya went with Lily to see Kieron, he must be really shocked to see her right now. But I like that she will be in his house and not all alone out in the cave. Loved the wolf protecting the girls and following Lily, so cool. Lily is so sneaky but I love that she is excited and happy for the couple and trying to get them back together. A bit worried for Estraya's safety now in town, but I am sure Kieron can protect her.

Lily is such a little sneak! Hahaha! Cant wait for the next update. Keep up the good work! :)

I am tempted to destroy the very CONCEPT of a cliffhanger. now, it wouldn't bug me if there was another chapter, but there isn't, so... *begins to search for magical mindwipe*

other than that, i loved it. especially the part with Lily paying off the guard XD

I love this story. I can't wait to figure out why Kieron hides his face, and I want to learn more about he earth spirit is it as deadly as the fire spirit?

Things are finally progressing between them I can't wait :D they will be such an awesome couple:)

awesome chapter! cant w8 2 find out wat happen next on monday. personally i like this one betta den lucian and sara's.

I think Kieron's story is really good! Your writing has improved alot and I think people love wolves and vampires and maybe it'll just take some getting used to with elementals!

I personally think this story is one of my favorites, I love elementals! And I'm really enjoying how you are taking this story :)

This has been my favorite chapter of this story. I am really starting to get into it now. I love the characters!

Please ! You are so mean ! But, as a writer, it was a good choise to keep your reader hanging and wanting more.

I like how things are progressing between Estraya and Lily, but I feel like you're repetitive about Kieron's feelings, though I'm not sure it could have been avoided.

I'll be waitng for the next chapter.

The story is just as great as your other works. The suspense is killing me to find out what happens in the end...

thank you for writing!