i don't think it's not as good as Lucian and Sara's i just think that it's taking a different route. Sara's spirit was kind of wild and needed taming more often, Kieron's isn't as imposing and the story is still building up to the main plot. i just think it needs a bit more action but you can't put that in anywhere, it has to be in the right place and this story is taking a little longer to get there. it's not a problem the story is still interesting.

this story is perfect so far. I'm sorry i haven't reviewed so far but i have been following your stories since your wolf series. You are a really good writer. this story is 110/100. Personally i like this one more then lucian and sara's.

Kieron and Estraya have more chemistyr than Sara and Lucian, for sure! I love this story! Hope you update soon.

Personally, I like this one better then the one with Lucian and Sara. I'm dying to find more out about Kieron.

soo i really do like this storyline a lot, but i think the pace is just too slow. Like we STILL haven't found out what's wrong with Kieron's face or what his spirit does or anything. I'm interested but the content of the chapters don't really motivate me to leave a review... I think this story is almost too laid back. There aren't that many wow moments. Anyway, that's just my opinion though. I still like reading your stories though, so keep writing :)

DAMN IT. You just HAD to cut it off at that, didnt you? NOO! Now, I have to wait till Monday!

It was nice getting to know Lily more! She's adorable, and I love how much she cares for her brother! It's so sad how Kieron thinks so low of himself... *sniff*

And are you kidding? This story is perfect! its my favourite story from you BY FAR! The fact that Kieron is such a different male protagonist from all the rest is what makes me love this story! I love him! Best. Character. EVER.

Anyway, I'll be waiting as always for Monday!

I liked Lucian and Sara's, but in my opinion I love Kieron and Estraya. I look forward to your updates, i really enjoy reading this story. Bottom line I love it and can't wait till the next one.

Love love love love love this story!

Personally, I think that maybe, there's too many secrets. I mean, with Lucian and Sara, we knew straight off what was wrong, what the prophecy was, et cetera ... But here, we've only seen Ermete twice, it's a bit unclear what he makes Kieron do, we don't really know Estraya's role in the prophecy (but the spirit obviously does ;P) ... I'm fine with this, really, but maybe some people aren't. I don't know. I really want read the next chapter ! Can't wait till Monday ;)

i believe things will get better between estraya n kieron

I love this story, I really like where you are taking this story.

Hey there, don't think that the lack of review (at least from me) is because the quality of this story is less than Sara's, life just gets super busy and while I read your stories on my phone, it won't let me review so if I absolutely want to say something I have to steal away a few minutes at work to do so. Kieron's story is also more slow paced and different than Sara's with completely different personalities and attitudes but I love it just the same. Keep it up, I can't wait for the following chapters, I want to know what he's hiding under that hood *wink* and what he will say now that she's in his home... :)

I like your story alot. Right now it feels like its going really slow and I'm not too sure where you are taking this story. I feel like you have Kieron shrouded in too much mystery and it is kind of holding the story back. But, I really do like the concept and plot you have created.

Great chapter! I love this story so much, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Glad shes there to tell him ccomforting words, but I'm scared that her husband is going to find her!