Lovely! Can't wait for more!

Interesting chapter that once again elaborates on the outsider status of the two.

I'm wondering if the wounds on her back are scars or welts.

If they are scars it remind me of Beloved and the tree on her back. A cherry tree. Train tracks.

Apparently my inbox is no longer allowing me to get mail from fanfiction or fictionpress (same email distributor I think), and I have not seen an update form you in two or three weeks and I was wondering what was going on, thinking it on. I went to check your page and found you had three or four more chapters up to my shock! O-O;

I just caught up and I am very intrigued about where this is going. I like the interactions Kieron and Estraya have, they are foundation builders. I particularly like that last bit in chapter seven. Very sweet without being too cuddly and gooey.

Hopefully I can figure out what is going on with my mail so I can get your updates again! (I know I didn't block them... I don't think. Hmm... in the mean time I'll have to check manually). DX

Not bad at all. I'm thoroughly intrigued with this story. I'm patienly waiting for when he shows his face to her.

SO Sorry that I haven't been able to review but my house got flooded about 2 weeks ago so I am now living out of boxes and am sleeping in the living room! :) Crazy, huh? My whole basement floor has been ripped out and I probably will not be able to return to my room in the basement for several weeks. :( I have also come down with a nasty flu with coughing, headaches, stuffy noses and fevers which has not been very fun. Luckily, I am started to feel much better and am happy to say that I spent my Christmas with much of my extended family with minimum coughing! ;) Unfortunately for my laptop, it was caught in the flood and was sent to the repair shop. I just got it back today and checked my email only to find 40 unchecked emails that I had to go through and respond to! :) I was very happy to hear that your plagerising problem has been solved for now and to find that you have continued to update your stories! :) I hope that you have an awesome Christmas/Holidays! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Hey!

(first of all gt ready for a really long review)

ok soo first let me tell u, U ROCK! i mean seriously... i have read all of ur wolf series and have truly appreciated dem coz good books r really hard 2 find and alsoo seeing dat it was completely different from da genres dat u write (or so ive been told :P) i really give u credit for dat secondly im nt a person who writes reviews coz im to damn lazy and also at times im nt very good at conveying emotions through writing and wen i do (which is very scarce) they're very long 2 make up for all da stories da authors have written (it doesnt mean dat i dont enjoy readin dem)soo if i really lyk dem dey go 2 ma favs soo im sry if i havent reviewed any of ur stories bt i find dem truly fabulous (u must be gettin tired of da praises bt i want 2 say it once more I LUVED UR BOOKS) ok back 2 da point thirdly I DO NOT READ STORIES DAT ARENT COMPLETED im soo shocked dat i even read dis, i dont mean it in a bad way bt u know wen ur reading a bokk dats updates chaps regurlarily and den suddenly stops ( i know it has 2 be hard for da author and im nt bitching abt any1 ) bt it seriously leaves u frustrated bt at da back of ma mind i know dat ull finish it and u wont leave anyone hanging by a thread ) ok so just continue dis fabulous work...oh and dyr was dis 1 part dat i dont really get its wen Kieron comes 2 Estraya wen shes having nightmares im nt really sure whether she looks into Kieron face or shes just scared coz of hr nightmare? i mean does she see Kieron face without da hood?

XOXOXOX

Freak Of Music

Hi ! Sorry if I don't tell anything consistent and useful for your writing, but I think what I'm going to say never hurts. It's the fifth story I'm reading from you. I like your work. Keep going and know that I'm most likely going to be one of your readers, even if I don't often review. I especially like your characters. See you.

aww its finally picking up n shes letting loose yay! saw a little bit of a comparison to wolfs duty with the dream n all. but hey if it works it works. cant wait to see how this one plays out.

take care. merry christmas!

I have started reading your stories when your halfway done writing your second book of your wolf series. Your stories are the best I have ever read and I use your writing style as a guide for other stories i intend on reading. I have yet to find one that exceeds your stories. Keep up the excellent work with your stories and have fun writing your stories.
Merry Christmas

AMAZING! With every chapter this story gets better and better..! Don't EVER stop writing!

Wait... Is there nothing wrong with his face? Is that why people freak out when they see it?

Aww, Kieron's so sweet. Ah, this slow pace is really creating a lovey-dovey allure to it. I absolutely love Kieron, he's not your usual male protagonists, but he is interesting. Hope you update again. Merry Christmas!:)

Another lovely update! I can't wait for the next one!

Merry Christmas! (Or Happy Hanukkah, or whatever you celebrate!)

Excellent chapter, I loved how he sensed her nightmare was troubling her and then found her. Plus he told her he would protect her too, so sweet. I'm glad she felt she could reveal some things to him and confide in him. Great chapter, I can't wait for more! Happy Holidays!

more secrets whoop! i wonder who's selena ]