i really like the story so far :) and merry christmas!

charlotte

Well, lets start with I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this chapter. Between my own writing, work, and Christmas being so close I just haven't had time to do anything (with the later 2 I haven't even had much time for my own writing T_T)

ANy way, I wonder what he's going to do now. He can't just leave her in the cave all the time. What's he gonna do? Take her to his house? How would he hide her from his sister? Lots of curiosity going on here. Can't wait till I get the chance to read the other two chapters.

love it! can't wait for the next one! : )

thanks for the update and Merry Christmas!

The story is reaching a wonderful dynamic, specially between the main couple. It's addictive.

that was so sweet :'( lol. it made me want to cry. How could that nasty man just take her? She didn't promise herself to him, so therefore in my eyes she's not married! He is cruel and i can't wait for Keiron to kick his ass! Pardon my French :)) lol.

Can't wait till Monday! Merry Christmas!

Hehe, imagine my surprise when I saw an update today. This totally made my day (or afternoon, whatever)! I'm just a bit confused though, did Estraya see Kieron's face? Because she saw his eyes, and I'm not sure if Kieron put on his hood when he got dressed..? I don't think you mentioned it. And I wonder who this Annabelle is... I know she's in some way associated to Kieron's past, but that's all...

Anyway, great update as always!

Oh so cute! They're adorable together, but I wish this story would do something. Well, it's probably moving at the right pace, but knowing that something will go wrong makes me want to see it happen sooner. GR! I still can't wait for the next chapter, though all this character building and bonding whatnot is melting my heart in its cuteness. Good writing.

I loved this chapter its my favorite so far! Cant wait till monday!

Finally the mystery of Estraya;s past has been uncovered! I really enjoyed this chapter of how they become closer.

Aw. That is so adorable! Hooray for Monday and Thursday updates!

I have just spent the last two days reading not one by ALL of your fictionpress stories. You have some amazing talent! My only criticism is that there isn't more yet! I definitely want to purchase your books (if I ever get money again), and I hope you update soon! I love your characters, all of them! The wolf series was just want I was craving. :) I've been searching for a good werewolf book. :D I hope to read more of your work soon!

Ah I really like Kieron, I love his personality.

They're cute.

It's really cute how innocent Estraya is. She doesn't know what she does to Kieron! (;

I'd say...option 2.

Thank you for another awesome update!

I love this story~

I love this story~

I l-l-l-love this story~

And I cant wait for the next chapter. x3

Also, I vote for option 1~ -

Beauty and the Beast allusion.

I vote for 1.