I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm glad Estraya and Kieron are getting along. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I would prefer to have the Monday and Thursday updates during the holidays. Have a Merry Christmas!

I pick door number 2, monday and thursday updates.

Great chapter, i can't wait to learn more about Amir and why he wants her, maybe it has something to do with her calming effect? They are both so guarded and afraid of opening up it'll be interesting to see how they open up to each other.

awesome chapter! :) i would like to choose option 2. cant wait to find out what happen next! :)

Aw I love this chapter (: I think its cute that Kieron gave her his shirt.

You should do the Monday and Thursday updates again (:

I love them opening up to one another and maybe becoming friends, thou both seem so damaged and used. At least they will have this bond with each other to develop on. I wonder what Amir wants from Kieron, that Gavin is having him make. Will his chest be bare now that he has given his shirt to her? Can't wait to see her reaction to this if it is.

I would like to chose option 2, updates on Mon and Thurs. Just because we travel over the holidays and I may not get to read every day if you post.

WOW... you make it so hard to pick... i really want the christmas bonaza, but i also want the twice weekly updates... hmm... let's go with the Christmas bonaza! Maybe that way you'll get this story done faster :)) hahah jkjk i love it, but the next story will possibly be my favorite out of all of them!

I'm loving Estraya, she's getting a little more accustomed to Keiron and his strange ways. She's more forgiving than she seems and i'm growing to like her. I can't wait until she sees his face though. She had a chance this time, but i'm glad that she took that time to let him trust her and not peek. Update soon!

Haybell ;)

The chapter's good, Estraya is opening up more so it will allow them to work together in future chapters. i'm kind of wondering what the prophecy is and how it relates to Kieron? as for the updates, i say keep them as they are, while an xmas bonus would be nice i enjoy the longer chapters and if you're updating more you get less time with your family, you deserve to enjoy xmas too.

i really like it so far! :) and i thought this chapter was really sweet

charlotte

i wonder when she will see kieron's face...

I really like how Kieron and Estraya's relationship is progressing, though I must admit that I'm intensely curious about what Kieron looks like, and what makes Estraya special.

Monday-Thursday updates sound very appealing. Don't overwork yourself. :D Merry Christmas!

Great chapter, I really like the way Estraya is very skittish about how she should act towards Kieron, and I like the way he half-confided in her, about his face, but still, he didn't say he was burned ... I hope it's not too horrible. Anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter, and I think you should do the Monday/Thursday updates.

Wow! I love it so far! Is Estraya some kind of special elemental person as well? :O

But I think it's meant to be 'the material *swamped* her,' not 'the material *swapped* her.'

NGAW D

Hey Jenny, glad to see things are back! Sorry this had to happen, last November the plagiarists went nuts. Anyway, good chapter!

Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!