I just loveloveLOVE this story so far. :) You're such an amazing writer. I was very sad when you had decided to stop writing. I'm glad you're better and back to writing. Keep up the amazing writing and dont let anyone get you down!

Oh my goodness you scared the living crap outta me! I can't even explain how devastated I was. Today I was like, well I guess I'm just going to have to reread her stories now (which I do anyway, I always go back and read your stories over and over again because I love them that much) then I saw that you updated and I gently laid my computer aside, got up, calmly walked outside and YELLED AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS and did a happy dance, so I wouldn't freak out everyone inside. I seriously was like, 'now I don't have anything to read anymore, what am I going to do?'

I'm so glad that you're alive and kickin! I love your stories and keep overcoming those obstacles!

Im so glad that you are back. I would really love to know why he has to hide his face?

THIS IS REALLY GOOD. I REALLY love how Kieron's character is like! Its great that he's different from the other male characters in the past! I really love how he's so dark, mysterious, and he has that dangerous side. But he also has a soft side, like when he was talking to Lily. Im REALLY curious as to what his face looks like and what his curse is... Im guessing his curse is something like a beast inside of him..? Like he cant control his powers sometimes, Im not sure... Anyway, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter then! Loving the story so far!

YAy! you're back I haven't even read the story yet I just had to comment first... I almost cried when I read that you were on hiatus!

I feel I severely dislike Amir already. And King Oliver is a wussy. Kieron, however, I completely approve of, although he seems a bit of a martyr for my tastes. There are a few breaks where I feel there should be commas, but that may writing style varying between peoples and countries. Over all, I'm curious how this will turn out, and about that jewel Amir referred to-it makes me think he might be looking for something that can keep Estraya from running away xD I'm most definitely looking forward to another installment.

i love you.

and oh my gosh it's so good!

i can tell i want to punch amir in the face already...

I'm so happy to hear that you'll be writing again! I didn't get a chance to respond to your last notes because my internet's been down, but now it's back up and i was happy to find a chapter!

This was really good. i can't wait to hear how Estraya describes his face. IT seems we will only get a description from her :)) This is a really flowing story. It makes sense, nothing is left out and it's very unique! I love it! This might be my favorite over this and Seared by Desire! Can't wait till your update Monday! :))

Haybell

PS: When will that one character we discussed come into play? lol sorry, but they're my favorite type of character and i can't wait! I also know how much you like to write abotu them and i was wondering how much longer you could stay away from them ;)) lmao

Im sorry to hear all of that happened. Your stories are amazing and I can't believe you didn't win. I also agree with the whole work lecture and in my opnion it was really excessive on your bosses part, but what do I know? In any case, I will say that i cna't wait for your next post and I can see that this is going to be another great book in a series of amazing accomplishments.

Your Humble Servant

Shinigami RULES

And so the plot thickens...I'm so glad you didn't decide to give up this story! You're a great writer.

Yay! Glad you're back! That was a fabulous chapter, I'm excited to read more about Estraya! I just got finished with all exams and projects for this quarter so I was really happy to see this chapter up! Thank you for not quitting!

I wonder if this rare jewel that King Amir is talking of is Estraya, and now Kieron is meant to entrap her for him. So curious as to what Kieron's face looks like, I am thinking he is stunning rather than hideous. And these red vision filled moments what is wrong/ or rather so special about him, so anxious to find out. Oh and I just knew you would be back. Someone who clearly enjoys writing and is as awesome as you are just can not stay away from it for long. Life just has a way of getting in our way when there is something that we love and really want to be doing, but responsiblities take precedence sometimes. Glad you are back!

man, this story is so unbelievably intrigueing. love it. can't wait for monday

i really want to know why he hides his face! i know this is so shallow of me but i hope hes not too ugly

Yay! I'm glad you are back! :)