What a curious start. They run into each other right off the get-go. I am intrigued and wonder what Estraya could possibly be, at the same time you offered up more of an intro for Kieron it felt like, due to the little information let us get. Very interesting, though I can't really guess where you're going with this just yet - that shouldn't be a surprise it usually takes a few chapters to figure the plot and characters out.

I know what story I'll be eagerly awaiting to update on Mondays now. (;

-Robin

I've been moving around so much I never have a stable address to order the books from. Hopefully, as soon as I can find the damn (pardon my language) address to the post office on this base, I can order all the books. Love this. Can't wait till next week! Now I have a reason to enjoy Mondays again.

Yes, so glad you are back and with a real gem it seems. Very intrigued to find out what they are. They are obviously something different and both seem to have a lot of misery in their lives right now. Looking forward to more.

Like the story so far but I got one question... Where exactly is this story taking place?

i want to know what the earth prophecy is and also why he cant show his face. so happy your back, cant wait for next week

I was just checking my e-mail a few days ago and I said to myself, I miss your weekly updates. Then here today I see a new story! YAY! Update soon! :)

The chapter is a good start to the story, highlighting both characters but by the end of it i'm more curious about Kieron rather than Estraya. His character seems more mysterious than hers right now.

I love people from the desert in stories. They remind me of gypsies. I'm excited to see where this is all going to lead.

Good start! I want to get to know the characters more, especially Kieron!

Looking forward to reading this story :D

That was really interesting! I liked them both XD And for some reason I really love the names haha

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)