J'aime bien ton style, et l'histoire est sympa, dommage qu'elle soit aussi courte! Enfin si tu n'as pas écris un roman c'est que tu as de bonnes raisons )

Bonne continuation!

Wow...that was different, original and something that I wasn't expecting from you; I really liked it (Or I liked as much as my very basic French allowed me XD)

This one is going to favorites...